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endless syndetic

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... you forever because it's always perfect and your fingertips leave
trails on my skin that glow and dance like
firecracker scars and too much of you is never enough
and the ache for you in my bones is cacophanous and it drowns
out all that tar that spills from your lips
and i always want to kiss them and
i see your face on every streetlit corner and
i hear your voice when singers smoulder in love songs
and it'll never end and we fuse and laugh and scream
and being on fire never felt so free and we'll drink gin into
the scarlet morning and laugh until
our cheeks burn and you are
the smell of rain and baby's laughter and shooting stars and
soft skin and sea spray and sunrises and endless nights
and i'll love...
17/7/11

i'm a fan of syndetic lists, sibilance and metaphors about fire

inspired by bret easton ellis, zoe skoulding and a beautiful boy
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Tuishimi's avatar
Lovely imagery!!